"Padmi, post: 1849544, member: 109877"]
here you are our disign. Do you know if both sentences are ok?
The sentences are ok, but just for a clean look, I would leave the period off.
I LOVE IT.
Can I buy one? This is a money making opportunity for your shooting club.
Sure, But we are not earning money with the this. It is only to identify our team and sure, I am going to prepare one to you with your name and bring it to me to the US in August. For sure, We are going to visit this time the East Coast (During our Last trips we were visiting the central and west states, also texas and Louissiana). I prefere the mountains and the countryside, my dream is to have a ranch in South Dakota or Texas!
But, if you are not living in the East Coast I can send it to you by post, at the same price that we are paying for sure! Now I am in the office but I migh explain you guys the red cross on the design. You can see it in some states of the US, I have seen the "Aspa de Borgoña or Austria cross" in Santa Fé.
At the end, your country and mine have the same culture, also, our country helped you in the past to get the independence fighting with British Empire.
Unfortunately here in Spain you people do not respect our flag and traditions, and the new Comunist Goverment is destroying our country.
All right, my goal is not making money with the Sweatshirt design, is to enjoy with my friends here and also with you guys that are helping me a lot in my first steps in this nice world!